I opened up my notes for Shuffle today and it doesn’t seem to make sense anymore. I know I what the characters are doing. I know how I want the characters to feel. But there’s a problem.

Their behavior doesn’t express how they feel.

Maybe I just need to read through it a few more times and get back into the Shuffle “zone”. But I think the script is going to go through an overhaul. Maybe not a major one, but something has to change. It seems real bland. The message is lost.

Maybe I need to figure out exactly what the message is.

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